The most unforgettable moment in my life is when I become the runner up of speech contest in Islamic Boarding School. The day before I join the speech contest, I always keep practice every day and everywhere for showing my best performance. Actually, I practice if I have free time in my boarding house. Besides that, I must find a good title for my speech. Finally, I get a good title, the title is “Akhlakul Karimah of Prophet Muhammad saw”. After I get the title, the thing which I do is learn how to be a good speaker and how to pronoun the Arabic as good as possible. After I show my best performance my feeling is so happy, because I can stand in front off a lot of people and I get the result that I the runner up of this contest. I become a famous person in Islamic Boarding School and I get a lot of experiences from this contest. So, I feel so happy to join this contest,I get a lot of experiences and makes my parent proud.
Topic Sentence : The most unforgettable moment in my life
Controlling idea : when I become the runner up of speech contest in Islamic Boarding School
Hi Diki
BalasHapusOne thing that I wanna make sure is, when it's happen? Just make sure you do in right tenses.
It's then amazing experience, ya as u also become famous then after:-)
BalasHapusYep, justify the tenses u use. U talked about the past, but u use Present tense for the whole sentences. It's basically good when u a able to develop ur TS and elaborating ur supporting sentences systematically. However, there a also several things have to be taken into account. First, definitely about the grammar (I discussed it a bit earlier). It does not only about the tenses but also about the parts of speech, common and proper noun, and the use of appropriate conjunction. Next is punctuation. Be awfully aware of it as some sentences u make contain run-on sentence. Lat but not least try to use more vocab, and avoid many repetition in using the words.Keep practicing ur writing, the boy in fame:-)