Jumat, 07 Oktober 2011

Romantic Movies Lover

I have a classmate who have a hobby watching movie. His name is Sigit Santoso. His hobby is watching and he likes romantic movie. One of the romantic movie which he likes is Broke Back Mountain. Actually, he always go to the cinema with his friend and sometimes with his family. He likes romantic movie because, there are no violence and harm. Another reason he likes romantic movie because, can make he crying and make him comfort when he watches it. He collects a lot of Indonesia and Western romantic movies. So, he almost knows all romantic movies.
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2 komentar:

  1. Nabiilah Ramadhan7 Oktober 2011 pukul 23.20

    That is an interesting story!
    In my opinion, it is unnecessary to put comma after the word 'because', I guess.

    BalasHapus
  2. Refika Amaleea Fitri12 Oktober 2011 pukul 12.35

    Ya, I agree with Nabil, nice description:-) Why don't u mark the TS and CS, Diki? It's better 4 u to do so, for the audience will easily recognize what is ur writing about. Er, u hafta deal a lot with grammar, SV agreement, and the rules of each different type of sentences. However, ur vocabulary is good enough. Em waiting 4 ur better writing product.

    BalasHapus

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